Technologic Invasion

The internet, like other technologic inventions, came into our lives at the late 20th century and become more and more popular. Because of it's accessibility and simplicity internet is one of the most useful technology today.

On the one hand,the internet is such a great, useful thing. People use the internet for business, fun, studies and even for shopping. This way there is much more spare time for other tasks and hobbies. The internet makes our lives easier.(This is good and so correct, but too general)

On the other hands, the internet has some negative effects as well. Today, most of the children are addicted to the computer, one of the reasons is surfing the internet. Young kids are able to get into any chat room and talk to people they should not talk to. In addition, the internet prevent(ww.+gr.) physical activity and harms our health.

To sum up, I think that internet is great and necessary, while it does not change our lives too much.(What do you mean?). we should not be the " internet slaves(phr.)" but using(gr.) if(ww.) to help us.

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Daphna