Sport is a very large "issue" divided to two main categories: Team sports and individual sports. Team sport(s) combine the strategy from the whole team(phr.) while individual spots focus on self ability(ww.). They are both popular all over the world, (however,) I think team sports is better.
First of all, team sports is a(מיותר) much more complicated then(sp.) individual sports ; the players work as a team, win as a team. They use the fact of being(phr.) in a group and have better score(s), which is one of the advantages of playing in a team.
In addition, playing in a team is much more attractive than individual sport(s).In my opinion, watching a group of people winning together making(gr.) the fans much more exiting(ww.). I think that this is the main reason why team sports are more popular than individual sports. For example, football and basketball games have more fans than a marathon race.
To sum up, team sports and individual sports sometimes seem similar, but they are totaly different. I believe that the exitement of the team sports attract people more then(sp.) individual sport(s).
You are still not explaining clearly. You have to rephrase some of your sentences.
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Daphna
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