13 Hoffyen street
Holon
April 8th 2010
Station Manager
Reshet Bet
19 Muta-Gur street
Tel Aviv
Dear Sir\ Madam,
I am an 11th (grade) studet in Kugel high shchool. I have heard about your wish to produce a new radio show for teenagers and I would like to present you my opinion(ww. - idea) for the new show.
I suggest that you should(מיותר) start a new show talking about driving among teenagers. Most of the new drivers are teenagers with a low confidence or teens with too high self confidence, which cause(gr. - causes) them to drive too fast and unsafety(ww. - unsafely). The new program will include tips for drivers from other teenagers and current events around the country conacted(sp.) to unsafety(ww.) drivers.
I believe that the show will be a huge success. I think that new drivers will feel better to talk about their problems with other teenagers than their parents or other adults. In addition, the show may teach unsafety(ww.) drivers to drive "by the book". This subject is relevent because I think the comunity is not aware enough for(ww. - of) teenagers' driving problems. the show will be devided into 2 parts, for each of the main problem.
To sum up, I hope that you take it into conciderations(מיותר), and the new show will help the teenagers to drive better at(ww. - on the) roads.
Sincerely yours,
Jecky Brown
(80)
Daphna
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