12 Ben-Zvi street
19/4/10
Holon
"See the World" Travel Agency
10 Guild street
New York
Dear Sir/Madam ,
I am a 16 years old guy from Israel, and I would like to use your company's service to see New York city. My special interests include sight seeing and sport games.
As I said before, I like sport games and unique places. For example, I would like to see the museum of natural history or The metropolitan museum of modern art . In addition, I would like to see some sports like american football games.
Even though these attractions look amazing, I must consider the cost of this trip. How much money cost each night at the hotel?(phr.) Does the hotel provide meals? In how much time I can visit at whole or most of the attractions(phr.) I mentioned before?
In conclusion, I hope to hear from your company as soon as possible, so I can start planning my trip
Sincerely yours,
Jay Green
(78)
Daphna
Tuesday, April 20, 2010
Wednesday, April 7, 2010
13 Hoffyen street
Holon
April 8th 2010
Station Manager
Reshet Bet
19 Muta-Gur street
Tel Aviv
Dear Sir\ Madam,
I am an 11th (grade) studet in Kugel high shchool. I have heard about your wish to produce a new radio show for teenagers and I would like to present you my opinion(ww. - idea) for the new show.
I suggest that you should(מיותר) start a new show talking about driving among teenagers. Most of the new drivers are teenagers with a low confidence or teens with too high self confidence, which cause(gr. - causes) them to drive too fast and unsafety(ww. - unsafely). The new program will include tips for drivers from other teenagers and current events around the country conacted(sp.) to unsafety(ww.) drivers.
I believe that the show will be a huge success. I think that new drivers will feel better to talk about their problems with other teenagers than their parents or other adults. In addition, the show may teach unsafety(ww.) drivers to drive "by the book". This subject is relevent because I think the comunity is not aware enough for(ww. - of) teenagers' driving problems. the show will be devided into 2 parts, for each of the main problem.
To sum up, I hope that you take it into conciderations(מיותר), and the new show will help the teenagers to drive better at(ww. - on the) roads.
Sincerely yours,
Jecky Brown
(80)
Daphna
Holon
April 8th 2010
Station Manager
Reshet Bet
19 Muta-Gur street
Tel Aviv
Dear Sir\ Madam,
I am an 11th (grade) studet in Kugel high shchool. I have heard about your wish to produce a new radio show for teenagers and I would like to present you my opinion(ww. - idea) for the new show.
I suggest that you should(מיותר) start a new show talking about driving among teenagers. Most of the new drivers are teenagers with a low confidence or teens with too high self confidence, which cause(gr. - causes) them to drive too fast and unsafety(ww. - unsafely). The new program will include tips for drivers from other teenagers and current events around the country conacted(sp.) to unsafety(ww.) drivers.
I believe that the show will be a huge success. I think that new drivers will feel better to talk about their problems with other teenagers than their parents or other adults. In addition, the show may teach unsafety(ww.) drivers to drive "by the book". This subject is relevent because I think the comunity is not aware enough for(ww. - of) teenagers' driving problems. the show will be devided into 2 parts, for each of the main problem.
To sum up, I hope that you take it into conciderations(מיותר), and the new show will help the teenagers to drive better at(ww. - on the) roads.
Sincerely yours,
Jecky Brown
(80)
Daphna
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