45 Hofyen street
Holon
30 July 2010

Mr Jame Adams
Best Friends
30 Hoffyen

Dear Jame(Mr. Adams),

I would like to become a volunteer in (the)"Best Friends" organization, the most activity(ww. - active) animal's organization in Israel. I want to join to(מיותר) this group because I think that people all over the country do not understand the important(gr.- importance) of animal organizations (Don't you mean: "animal rights"?). Kids abuse cats and other small animals without any reason. I want to change this situation.

Animal organization required understanding(phr. and gr.), patience and determination. I belive(sp.) I have all these qualities and I can help and contribute to the organization. I am good with animals, I know how to calm down a struggling cat or an angry dog.

In addition I already volunteer(gr. - use the present perfect) in another animal organiztion close to my neighborhood or(ww.) in my school, but they quit(ww.) because of lack of members(ww.). I want to join a real organization that really changes things. I wantto help the poor abused animals plus(ww.) I want the community to be aware of this situation.

I look forward to your reply.

Yours truly,

Shoval Yosef

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