Virtual Schools

Virtual schools are schools that are based on the new technology of the 21st century. They are different from other schools in their teaching methods. Unlike regular schools, Virtual schools teach their students on the internet, through online lessons. The teacher talks to the pupils through a microphone and the students can ask questions at(ww.) the chat.

On the one hand, virtual schools use very advanced technology and it looks like a better way to teach the students. The lessons are on line, talking to the teacher by using a microphone, which gives them the option to be everywhere they want. It also motivates to(מיותר) the pupils to study, and they can not bother each other like (they do) in class.

On the other hand, virtual schools can not have the advantage, like(ww. - of) working together in class, feeling what the teacher is trying to "pass" them with his body movement.(phr.- you are translating this from Hebrew. Look for a different way of explaining your slef ) There are some disadvantages to online schools, like technical problems. (what other disadvantages are there? It seems you haven't completed this paragraph properly).

To sum up, I think that virtuals schools can be a very good teaching way(ww.), but they can not replace the old, regular schools. Our technology is not good enough to solve all the problems at(ww.) online schools and I think we should keep the old fashion way, and study in the regular schools.

A bit better, but there is still work to do.
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