45 Hofyen street
Holon
3 December 2009



Mrs. Gilat Simon
Principal
Kugel High School
1 Mota-gur street
Holon

Dear Madam,

Every year Israei students and teachers go on a trip to Poland. This trip is very important to Israelis and Jews. I am writing to complain because many children in my school want to take part in the trip, but some of them are not able to go because of the high price of the trip.

First of all, students and teachers go on this trip all over the country every year.
The journey is planned by the the ministry of Education for any 11th grade student in every school. The main idea of this trip is to preserve the memory of the Holocaust and teach the new generation about it.

In addiotion, the journey and the kids who go to Poland keep the ceremony(what? don't you mean - memory?) in our country alive to "remember and never forget". It just shows how is(מיותר) the journey is important. But, just like I said before, it is too expensive, although the government is able to fund some of the money.

In conclusion I am very disappointed about(ww. - with) the "tries(ww.- attempts)" to help kids who can not afford the money for the journey. I think that the government can use some money from the education buget and pay some of the funds.

I look forward to a propmt reply.

Sincerely yours,

Shoval Yosef


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