Unhealthy Food

Eating unhealthy food makes us reacte more aggressively compared to eating healthy food, which makes us more calm and relaxed. If we want to change our reality of eating unhealthy food someone has to take the responsibility. Who is it? The consumers, or the manufacturers?

I think that the consumers should take the responsibility for the food they buy. Everyone knows how different foods effect on their body. No one tells us what to eat, and how to behave but ourselves. If the consumers want to buy and eat unhealthy food, I think they know what the effects will be.

In addition, the manufacturers put in the back of the product what it includes, to prevent cases of allergy and health problems. If people see what the components are,they are the only responsible for buying it or not. There is no better way to help people buy healthy or unhealthy food with their own money except this way.

To sum up, people should take the responsibility for their food. They have the choice to decide for what they buy with their own money.The only thing they should do is check out the components in the back of the products for healthy or unhealthy food.

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Formal Letter

34 Even Gvirol street

Tel Aviv

2 1 September 2009

Ms. Jane Green
Gordon high school
5 Sandro street
Haifa

Dead Ms. Green,

I saw your article about yough(sp.) that don't join the army or civil service.
I would like to add some information to your article about that, not enough people serve the community

Your article mentions that our country isn't large and powerful enough to allow its citizens not to serve the community. I would like to add that our country surround of Arab countries, which don't like us or even want to kill us. - and so? what is your point here?

In addition, people that don't join the army have an advantage compared to people that serve the community. Someone who doesn't join the army and starts his life has an advantage compared to someone who joined the army at the age of 18-21(Explain - what kind of advantage?). We can't live in such a society.(Explain - why does the society suffer from this?)

To sum up, there are not enough people that join the army and serve the community, which causes a problem to our society. There are different ways to solve it, but I think we should try everything together (This last sentence is n't saying anything. If there are "different ways to slove it", why don't you suggest one? and what do you mean by: "we should try everything together"?).

Sincerely yours,

Shoval Yosef

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IDF chief: Every youth must serve

Gabi Ashkenazi, the IDF chief, says that everyone must serve the community . We can't live in a society in which some of the people serve in the army or civil service and some don't. There is no reason that someone who serves will have disadvantage compared to someone who didn't join the army.
He also talked about Gilad, another reason for the shirkers to not join the army and said that they won't stop until they bring him home.

I agree with Gabi Ashkenazi. I think just like him, that everyone should join the army or engage in the civil service. Our country isn't large or powerful enough to allow its citizens not to serve. There are lots of hostile Arab contries around that might attack us just when we least expect it.

In addition, people that don't join the army have an advantage compared to people that serve the community. Someone who shirks the army at the age of 18 has 3 free years to start his life, like studying, working .People who serve in the army can't do that, this phenomenon of shirking the army makes an unstable society.

To sum up, I think every youth has to join the army or serve in civil service. We all have to help our country, even if it looks unimportant to us. That's where we live, and that's what we have to do.

http://www.ynetnews.com/articles/0,7340,L-3775464,00.html

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