In the 21th century the technology and science are very advanced. Because of that the quality of life has increased(ww. - imporoved) and got better and better in each generation passed(מיותר). Space exploration is one of the advancements of the last century. Today we don't know much about space and exploring all this "thing"(ww. - it) costs money and time(phr. - "requires a lot time and money").
On the one hand, space exploration is a positive thing. Because of the improvement in satellites, people can watch TV and talk to other people all over the world. Exploring space requires an investment of money and time but help(gr. - helps) many countries to control thier territory and sometimes even watch(ww.) things that will happend in the future like meteor's movements. We can't stop the advancement, our lives demand that.
On the other hand, space exploration cost(gr. - costs) a lot of money and expanded the situation(phr. - "..and expands the gap...") between the advanced countries and 3rd world countries, where people still fight for thier(sp.) lives. In addition, some satellite(s) were destroyed and thier(sp.) parts stay out in the space and dirty(מיותר) pollute space. It looks like we haven't finished exploring our world to the end and we rush into the space, maybe its a bad decision.
To sum up, I think space exploring is a positive thing that should improve along the(מיותר) time, And all the countries in the world should support it .
This is much better, but you still have a few problems with your grammar, spelling and phrasing. Please correct your work again. (80)
Daphna
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