22/1/09
Dear John,
I heard about your mountain problem, and I identify with you. It sounds really dangerous to climb on a 5000 meters high mountain, and your friends pressure you to do it but you are scared. I think I have two options for you.

On the one hand, climbing on a mountain is kind of dangerous and scary. So, if you think that it's too much just don't climb and don't affect from the pressure from your friends, We live only once and its not worth it to risk your life because of peer pressure.

On the other hand, you are on a camp with your friends and there are many ways to make you safe during the climb. Many people did it before and most of them were not offened.
Climbing on a mountain is a once in a life time experience and doing it with your friends makes it even better.

To sum up, I think you should decide what to do without being affected of the environment. I hope that you will solve the problem and choose the right thing to do for yourself.
Goodluck ,
shoval

This is a good advice letter, although you have to pay attention to your grammar. Please correct your work. (85)
Daphna.